A Problem for the Team v1

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Hello friends! As you probably all know, I've been working on this project for months now, mainly because the learning curve for both making videos and getting this recorded was steep!

Before i post this to YouTube, could you kindly take a peek? What I need from you is HONEST FEEDBACK. I'm not fishing for compliments. My goal for this video was to deliberately understate the imagery in order to hopefully make the overall narrative more powerful. If anything strikes you as melodramatic, or conversely, a bit TOO understated, please let me know.

And if anything hits you wrong about the recording, by all means let me know, but I think I've gone as far as I can with that right now with my limited recording capabilities. Also, if I have to work on this recording just one more minute, I will shoot myself. No joke. I am saturated with my recording "issues." I'm DONE. lol!

Thank you to Perry for mixing this! (Per, in the video editor, I boosted the high strings a bit in the left channel. I think it sounds okay, but do let me know if you think otherwise.)

This is being revealed to just a small group of my most creative pals. Kindly give me your feedback in a new message in email to maryannfarley118@gmail.com.

Of course, what's funny is that I'll be lucky if this gets 50 views on YouTube. But lack of recognition has never stopped me before in nearly killing myself for the good of a creative project. :)

Thank you all so much!

P.S. It sounds much better in headphones!

P.P.S. A much better thumbnail will be created for YouTube.